Talk:Skybox (2D) with Terragen and Skypaint - Advanced

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I was supposed to sleep ~9H ago, been editing this for the last ~6 so I'm pretty beat right now. I know the grammar isn't perfect and I might have missed something. I'm going to correct as much as possible as soon as possible, but now do I need some sleep and food ;).
The sky, I'm creating here, it will be released with maybe 2 or maybe three others later this week. This one might not fit the regular CSS map, but probably some cool space mod out there. It can be made into some cool motions and stuff with a sky portal. Well, good night! --Hipshot 03:04, 8 Jan 2006 (PST)

Moved page

I moved this page from "Skybox - Advanced" to "Skybox with Terragen - Advanced" to avoid confusion with 3D skyboxes and other articles. --JeffLane 11:46, 16 Jan 2006 (PST)

Cleanup

Someone should read through the article and pay extra attention to the following issues I noticed

  • Excessive use of colloquialisms (“ Anyway, .... ” “ Well, that was simple. ”)
  • Way too long paragraphs
  • Way too much emphasized text that pretty much nullifies the impact of italic text

Jupix 05:44, 29 Apr 2006 (PDT)

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